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Grumpy Nielsen's avatar

This was my face the entire time btw: 😧🥴🥴🤢

Iva Levarre's avatar

This was so suspenseful and vivid I forgot everything while I read it. The twist had me reeling with surprise, as did this part: "Now, Iva, I can see you look just as confused as the spider did. Now, don’t be cross with me. Please, allow me to explain." Thank you for another amazing chapter!

Whimsy & Woe's avatar

I just found out how to do that recently. Glad it landed with you. I went back and added it into chapter 2 as well.

Iva Levarre's avatar

I'm honored!

Anoushka's avatar

that took a way happier turn than I was expecting 🥹 also i have to admit I'm not generally a fan of the personalized username feature but it was done SO WELL in this story!!! like I was jumpscared but also added to making it feel like i was really there?? can't wait for ch 5!!!!!

Whimsy & Woe's avatar

I just discovered the feature this week. I'm loving it so far.

Kalle Kula's avatar

Haha me too! I first thought "my depressed work mate can't be right, this is not the Truman Show"

And then, "is this some demon crap, am I dreaming right now?"

And "Am I the only one commenting on his writings and has he seen my aggressive way of defending my points of view?"

Whimsy & Woe's avatar

This comment makes me infinitely happier.